All Comments on 'Mercy For Death'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
pretty cool

nice I liked it

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I love your story

Please finish it!!!

dreamcatcher7dreamcatcher7over 17 years ago
so good

I am loving this and need to read more and soon, so please please can we have more.

pandora4037pandora4037over 17 years ago
Lovely, but too short

I think you should give her a chance to live. Only 16 and already she has experienced so much despair and hopelessness. If turned she would have a chance to live her life even in death. But also she is still young enough to have hope, so if she died she would be redeemed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Please!

Write more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
More!!!!!!!

Geave her a chanins I think she wheel bring lite in to his life(figertivly ofcors)And make his life bairab.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
That was very intense

I love it. Not many people can pull off having a story up here that has absolutely no sex but is still very Heart racing.Although as the story progresses it seems like ti will be more of a romance the only thing being NON-Human about it being that he is a Vampire but still a very wonderful work of art!!!!!

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