Mesmerizing Melanie

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For a few moments, we remained silent as we all tried to catch our breaths from my double fucking, the only sounds other than the ocean waves were the three of us breathing together as one.

Kyle finally broke the silence.

"Ohgod, Melanie, that was unbelievable."

I tried hard to stay still and remain "hypnotized" as the two cocks pulled out of my well fucked body.

"Melanie?"

I stared straight ahead, still on all fours, completely stripped, with my milked tits hanging down, slightly swaying in the breeze, and my body filled with the liquid of two college guys.

"She's still hypnotized," Jeff commented as he spread the cheeks of my rear.

"OH!" I yelped as I felt the unknown object being removed from my ass. I never found out what it was that he shoved up my back door.

"Oh right," Kyle walked around to Jeff as they both put their satisfied man tools away...those wonderful rods that had just exploded inside me.

"So what do we do with her now?" Kyle spoke softly as if he thought I couldn't hear him.

I rolled my eyes. Kyle was really cute, if a bit thick.

Then I heard Jeff's voice.

"Melanie, can you hear me?"

"Umm hmm," I nodded slightly.

"In a moment, you are going to lie down and fall asleep," Jeff instructed, "when Kyle and I leave, you will wake up and think that everything you experienced in the past hour was part of a very erotic dream. Do you understand?"

"Umm hmm," I tried so hard not to giggle.

"Shouldn't we put her swimsuit back on?" Kyle asked, "you know, so she doesn't wake up naked."

"Ah, good idea," Jeff answered picking up my discarded swimsuit, "give me a hand."

Having been felt up, spanked, fingered, milked, stripped, and fucked by these two, you would think that putting my swimsuit back ON wouldn't be so sensual...

...but ohmygod it was.

The two of them gently lifted my ankles one at a time, pulled the swimsuit up my legs, and tugged it tightly over my rear. When the fabric gripped my still overly sensitive pussy, I felt like I could actually come again.

It was so erotic to not be able to move while their soft hands touched and caressed all the way up my body as they dressed me.

Both of the college students then came around to my front, each taking an arm and pulling the straps of the swimsuit onto my bare shoulders.

Their eyes looked directly into mine as each of them gently cupped one of my breasts and tucked it back into my top. My tits were so sensitive that their tender handling of my milk mounds made me tremble with a wonderful mini-orgasm...a final little present just for me.

"Goodbye, Melanie," Kyle whispered as he leaned in to kiss me. I responded shamelessly, sighing in pleasure as we made out. I knew I was a decade older than him, but this college kid sure could kiss.

"Thank you, Melanie," Jeff took his turn, kissing me so sensuality that I felt my pussy wet itself again.

I had been such a bad girl, letting two college students think they had hypnotized me.

The way they took advantage of me though, was an unbelievably perverted experience that I'd never forget.

As the two students got on their beach bikes, I laid down on my towel and pretended to go to sleep, purring in contentment.

I couldn't help but giggle to myself as I heard them driving away. By the time the sound of their beach bikes faded in the distance, I broke into a fit of laughter.

"Oh my goodness, girl you are insane!" I said to myself, "I can't believe I just did that!"

It was the wildest thing I'd ever done in my life.

As I stood up and gathered my things to head back to the beach house, I couldn't help but smile.

I definitely had an idea for my next book...

...perhaps a steamy romance novel...

...I even had the title...

"Princess and Whore"

***

A lot of time went into writing this short story, so please be kind with any comments or feedback (remember it is a FANTASY and is FICTION). Have fun reading my other stories as well, and I hope all of you remember to love yourselves as well as others. - xoxo Daphne.

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Simply delightful! Thanks for giving us this story. Off the charts Good!!

Daphne123Daphne1237 months agoAuthor

@Nightwander - thanks sweetie for the lovely words. Regarding the italics, I actually put them in my first few stories and when they were posted they were just regular print, so after that I just started using quotes and tried to make it clear that it was thought rather than speech. Also, "laying her head back" is a bit confusingly put, I agree. What I meant by that was Melanie, on all fours, raised her head up to look towards the sky like in a yoga "cow" pose. I do that a lot when I'm being spanked. :) So glad you enjoyed the story. - xoxo Daphne

NightwanderNightwander7 months ago

This is a great story, Daphne, really enjoyable. Having the whole thing narrated and described from Melanie's first-person perspective makes it incredibly sexy and sensual and naughty. I absolutely love the ambiguity of the hypnosis in this story: Melanie is sure that she's just faking being hypnotized, but her body's reactions are suspiciously similar to what Jeff is commanding her to do, hinting that she's actually somewhat hypnotized even though she doesn't seem to know it. Extremely well-written! My biggest constructive suggestion would be to use italics rather than quotes for Melanie's internal thoughts. It's confusing for the reader when a story uses quote marks for both dialog and internal thoughts, especially when the scene keeps mixing them both together, as this one does. Also, how does Melanie keep "laying her head back" when she's on her hands and knees? But overall, definitely five stars. Adding your story to my favorites!

StoryTeller07StoryTeller077 months ago

Great story, good pace, nice characters, hot theme, hotter scenes, mmm, nice. Has given me some ideas. Magicians Assistant isn't as nice but has a jappy ending which i like.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Just found you. Loved this story and the slant it gave. I will read more!

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