All Comments on 'Messy Halloween Mixup'

You really expect us to believe a shrew of a wife so controlling and vindictive she routinely denies her husband sex because a third party outside their marriage somehow to her petty mind subjectively one ups her vicariously thru a competition her husband wanst ever party to is going to engage in public sex with said husband?

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Fiction requires a suspension of disbelief, but it still need an internal consistency

Really hot. 5*

What a bunch of sewer rats.

Fun story but no way anyone can not tell the two wives apart. Height, weight, hair style, voices are all different. Same with the men. Gary much taller and fit and packing a huge dick. Story would make more sense if at the end beverly says how lucky jenny is and to tell him to stop at the pharmacy for a plan b pill.

It could have been a fun story but Bevs actions screamed desperation and since both couples we’re completely different, how do sober people not tell they’re fucking different people? Seriously, it’s so dark that it disguised their bodies, voice, height and mannerisms?

Like I said, it could have been fun but you needed us to suspend way to much disbelief.

Lost points with MC wearing panties and being disappointed that Gary didn't knock up his wife.

Cute

Got confused.

Were they adults or teen-agers?

lujon2019: In the beginning, she is going to deny sex to her husband because he lost the competition. At the end, she is willing to engage in public sex with her husband because (she thinks) he won the competition.

Erm the moment his commando wife took down her panties he had to know.

Beverly knew what she was doing, 6 inches taller and a bigger cock, cumming without clitoral stimulation...

And Jenny's no better only she lost out to a smaller cock.

All a bit sad really

Those two women need help. There's being competitive and then there's batshit crazy.

How does one walk all that way through wet and muddy woods without realizing he isn’t wearing pants or underwear? And seriously, 2 men live at the house - they don’t have some gym shirts or sweatpants he can borrow? They only have a spare Japanese schoolgirl outfit to loan out to his wife? Too many holes.

Well that was firmly set within the category if ridiculously stupid. From start to finish, this wasnt an accidental cuckolding. Nice try closeted boy.

Not sure if I read anything dumber lately or not but i did have a fart that was far more intelligent than this steaming pile of crap is.

I do hope mommy shuts off the wifi to your closet soon and therefore spares us from more of this....inane drivel.

Wow, hey, another terrible piece of shit from a talent free scribbler. Cheers and eat it up and drop dead, would‘cha, looser.

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Not funny, not good! 1*

Endless cuck crap over and over again. All the stories it seems are the same, stupid husband who either gets off on or doesn’t mind his wife screwing others and being the wimp and snickered at by the guy(s) who screw his wife.

Fag cuck shit. Thanks for the effort.

Lol

You get what you spent.

LOVE slap*hapy*papy #9

Pathetic