All Comments on 'Metamorphosis'

Your character comes across as whiney and entitled.

By chapter three I had lost any sympathy or interest in the character - and therefore the story.

ay sorrow one dildo rating, ay small one

Your writing has a real sense of reality to it which I enjoyed. I also enjoyed that her (your) boyfriend was a size queen as well, something I can identify with. There is a certain thrill to taking on extra large cock that gets me hot.

That's why all cultures ever since antiquity have tried hard to keep the female libido under control. Now I perfectly understand why - there can only be an endless series of follow-ups to this story but no containment, no happiness and no lasting satisfaction. Know your limits and tacitly abide by them is the golden rule of the wise. But anyway, good luck writing, fantasies are harmless and you've enlivened them neatly in your story.

More please... Fantastic story ;)

Go for it girl, there's little that can beat a big cock stretching your tight puss! Two are even better!