All Comments on 'Mexican Girl (Yoyogi)'

by DuccioGabrielli

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darkmask69darkmask69over 3 years ago
Loved it

Such an incredible tone. So dark, so alluring, and all quite satisfying.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I can't get my mind of the story I wish I can find a girl like her

yyyykkkkyyyykkkkabout 3 years ago
love this story the most :)

this story was so real that I always doubt if it did happen before.

somehow I wish I were the Mexican Girl that was sold to be a slavegirl in the end by the writer himself.

yyyykkkkyyyykkkkabout 3 years ago

in my mind, there is another ending ...

Mexico girl left before the wedding day, for another big city. she lived there, like a normal girl, work, made friends, and dated. eventually, one day, she found a sophisticated and nice guy, they lived together happily. she didn't want to be a slave anymore.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well written-- I could almost imagine it happening to me. Very bittersweet ending that makes it even more believable.

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I mostly write stories on female submission, pet, and impact play, inspired by my encounters in real life. I have discovered only recently Literotica, so I am uploading all my work here. I have started with a group of stories set in Tokyo locations,and now I am switching to...