All Comments on 'MFF - The Mystery Woman'

What a way to wake up !! Wonderful HOT action!! Great work!! Let's have more !

Great story, concept, imaginative writing, but you need an editor, assuming you _had_ proofed your work before submittal. Keep writing, but let an editor help. It won't be painful!

Wow what a fantasia, like living a dream. but better.

excellent story great writing. could do with another part.

of this very sexual erotic story,

but still good for a 5

Wonderful story, with realistic interplay between characters.