All Comments on 'Mia, the Kinetic Sorceress Pt. 01'

I don't normally read this genre but the title and short synopsis intrigued me. The storyline is fascinating and the dialogue is much better than quite a few stories I've read on here, I hope to read chapter 2 soon.

You've enraptured me completely. I can't even imagine how much loss and rejection he must be feeling. I love how you write and will be awaiting the next chapter. Followed 5 stars

I have been trying to find this story for years. I couldn't find it for so long. I am OVERJOYED that you've published it again.

Excellent, looking forward to more. It's not just a dream...

More, Please. Your imagination is great.

Wonderful reading this again. Haven’t seen it for a long time.

Such a great story. Thank you for republishing.

This is a fantastic tale so far.

While I am sad to hear that your publishing experience was a good one, their loss is absolutely our gain. I've been looking for this story ever since you originally took it down and am overjoyed that you brought it back (and it looks like added on to it). Welcome back, and I hope to read more of your stories in the future.

Many thanks for this. Now on to the next chapter.

She did an awful lot to him before asking for his consent. Not good.