All Comments on 'Miami Night Ch. 01'

Love your description of you and the guys in the elevator. You truly are Kinki. Love to hear from you.

I absolutely loved this story. I'd love to hear from you, too, but I am not anonymous like the last comment.

I absolutely loved this story. I'd love to hear from you, too, but I am not anonymous like the last comment.

After reading both parts, they seemed so real, and so sensuous, it made me wonder---are you a good writer, or a good reporter. I wondered if you were making it up as you went, or was a large part based on incidents that really happened. I have a hard time envisioning the elevator scene, but the rest was totally believable. And those that are believable are most erotic.... Damn, it made me horny!

I can't wait to read the next chapter. This was fantastic.