All Comments on 'Michael and His Teacher'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Not real enough

Spelling needs to be checked and bored of the whole blackmailed woman who then suddenly begs to be fucked. Just not real enough.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Too short

It was a good story but it could have been a little longer for my taste. Anyway it was still a good story.

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