All Comments on 'Michael & I Ch. 01'

Quite a decent start; keep up the good work.

Short but good. Looking forward to more.

Good read. Keep up the GREAT work.

Kept my attention. Left me wanting more. Can't ask anymore of a writer. Looking for the next chapter.

Reminds me of an novel series (Imp) I was taken with last week (at least in broad strokes). The first book in the series was titled "A Demon Bound".

So for all you fans out there who found they injoyed this premise, there is a niche for you out there.

I'm excited for the next chapter! ^-^

Nice. I really like the angel/demon theme, and that everything is clearly not as it seems. This story has a lot going for it already - instant attraction, supernatural stuff, drama, suspense. Good times. :) Can't wait for more!