All Comments on 'Michael or Mac Ep. 04'

Love your work. An editor might help with some of the syntax and spelling errors that distract from your wonderful story.

The storyline remains strong, and the grammar is good. Yes, the terminology isn’t what’s used in the Carolinas, but it’s easy to understand what’s meant. The geography is very good. I still don’t see where it’s headed… and it seems a little unusual that none of the teenage characters have any siblings. That all said, I don’t see why they tolerate Calvin, when Mac can call a no confidence vote to oust him; or build a strong case for misuse of company funds (excessive aircraft use).

Looking forward to more.