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by THIRDCOAST

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good but. . .

Gave you 4 but would have been 5 but for the change of tense and other grammar faults

THIRDCOASTTHIRDCOASTalmost 9 years agoAuthor

My apologies, it was a late night and my copy-editor is out of town. Thanks for the kind words though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Nice, but not my thing.

I'm still thinking that I missed something important not having chapter 4.

Orpheum 69

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