All Comments on 'Michelle'

first time. The emotions that an escort goes through the first time are very real and the sex is true to form. Your leading lady seems to relate well to upscale escorting. The ending is just too idealistic.

Beyond that one comment and one observation. First the observation, you need to be careful about names - first he was "Alex" and then without more his name changed to "Carl". While clients often don't use their real names, there was no transition, at least that I could find. Besides, when an escort goes to a hotel, generally she confirms the client's name with the room.

Second, the comment - unlike the USA, escorting is legal in the UK and Canada - and much of Europe.

to the author: good story well writen

to literotica: i think this story has been put into the wrong catagory.

Nice tale, written with feeling... Ms. James? Wrong catagory though.More please!

Well written but very disappointing because it was in the wrong category. I thought the editors were supposed to check these things before they posted them. Sheesh.

Good story, but you shouldn't introduce a guy by one name and then call him by another throughout the story. Not nonconsent either.

The condom should have broke. I agree with the other poster that this is not non consent.