All Comments on 'Michelle and suzanne'

Good job. However, the mass sex events seemed rather over the top for someone just starting.

I preferred the scenes with just the two of them. In fact, I'd be interested in a follow-up story about how their relationship develops. It seems like there is the beginnings of very deep feelings, perhaps love.

Thank you for your thoughtful comment! That's good feedback. I hadn't planned on doing any follow-up stories, but if there is interest, I may. Thanks for reading!

enjoyed this. I gave it 5 stars. Wasn't a big fan of the fraternity part but even it was done well. I especially like the one girl got hers.. I would have liked to see where these two can go from here, maybe you would reconsider and use your talent for a chapter 2? Thank you for writing. Pappasleaze!

Yes Sugar i am still here. Thanks for reminding me of this and ruining a day where i had so much to do,,but it was ruined in such a wonderfully wet way *winks*

hugggggggggggggs

suzanne

Thank you for your comment, Pappasleaze, and for your vote! Yes, the frat scene seems to be the least favorite for some people. It's polarizing, I know, but it fit the fantasy of my muse, so it's an integral part in that way. I appreciate the feedback, and will try to fit another chapter into my schedule. Thanks again for reading!

kitten!!! So glad you are still here, suzanne. I'm always happy to ruin your day, as long as it's in a wonderful, wet way. ;)

That was oner of the hottest stories I've read. You're a great writer!

Hot story! I bet it was a lot of fun to write! I liked the idea of the journal. I think you should have continued your journal too. How you made the change from submissive to dominant. A lot of potential here for you to have several more parts to this story.

Thank you VeronicaPlakhuea and Hornyoldwoman947 for your comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!