All Comments on 'Michelle Pt. 02'

Wrong category... Interracial couple is where this awful story belongs. This is NOT a "Loving Wife" kind of story. Very unlikable characters .

And at that point, I would leave.

No marriage, no sex, is worth being treated like shit.

He’s exhausted and she forces him to go to a club? It’s all about her. Everything is about her and honestly, that’s not a marriage anymore.

This story is just a piece of s**t

lol you are the luckiest man alive, you get to watch her fuck black men from a closet like a peeping tom and you get to watch her fuck women but dont get to touch.... You are the stupidest man alive hahahahaha

LMAO …. Nothing like trolling the wrong group with utterly insipid shite. Wow was this some cliched rewritten crap.

Excellent story! Love the interracial (Michelle 1 and 2), the "rape" scene with anal, very good!

More vomit inducing crap from a pathetic pussy boy husband. Still the writer obviously gets off on this type of thing. Probably even more so when adverse comments are made. So, no more comments from me... as I chunder into a bucket. He's like a little pet dog, isn't he?

And you thought the first part was bad…….!

EDITOR, EDITOR…EDITOR!

Know the difference between then and than.

Know the difference between there and their.

This stuff marks you as a rookie.

She is still a whore and he will always be a dumb wimp

can't wait for chapter 3

Loved the whore angle. Still want to read more about possibility of impregnation by her lover.

She will soon be an additional to the soousal homicide statistic

Anonymous I do no the difference in both cases. I just miss them in the editing process sometimes. As for Editors on this ap, good luck. It takes weeks for them to respond. Sorry, if my typo's bother you, just read another writer. Thanks.

It always amazes me that those that criticize the loudest always do anonymously. Okay, I am not a polished writer. Practice, practice, practice.

Your stories are disgusting.

Awful writing.Awful story 1*

Wasn’t even funny, yah see, in the latrine level of this side the crap flows daily and the smell is the same ol same ol. Nothing new, just curious for a change in the infantility nuances.

Captcha

Skank flips from bbJ right over to lesbian with no sign of a loving wife.

I'm not anonymous and I still write that your story has no realistic development. Your protagonist doesn't act like a "loving wife" but like a selfish slut who shows no respect let alone love for her husband.

What should be stimulating or entertaining about it?

Hey, at least gentle-touch4u and 26thNC are will to criticize AND give their handle. Okay, "Your stories are disgusting"-Hm, is this not an Erotica website? Not your type of stories, okay. 26thNC I don't even understand your comment, but oh well.

ALL of the negative comments, if the are anonymous or a name are from the sole pathetic loser troll. He spends hours a day posting these on every story. Just delete and ignor him. People come to this category specifically to read stories about slutty wives.

And using a made up name is STILL anonymous.

Hot again but the reality not so good . 1 in a million guys may be metal enough to allow wife to control, abuse him while she truly acts like the worst sexual pig in the world

But, if one uses Anonymous all the time I can't respond directly and perhaps ask for advice.

Ey is there a part 3 cumming?

Eventually. I am going slow now.