All Comments on 'Michelle's Kingdom Ch. 02'

I loved the way Michelle set up Val. I'm eager to read what happens next.

This just became a very good tale and I for one hope for another chapter soon.

Nice progression of a familiar tale, Michelle is wonderfully evil and more appealing because of it. Val, the feisty heroin not fully understanding quite what she's getting into. A well used plot but nothing wrong with that, if it ain't broke why mend it? But I hope the author can come up with a new twist, not to mention lots of salacious and perverted scenarios. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

What a great continuation, schoolgirl Bullies are absolutely my favourite. I like to write about them too. Thank You so much Lemontek. Can't wait for the next Chapter.

Ch.03 has been submitted, should be up in a couple days! Thanks for the feedback :)

Thank you so much for continuing this story, long after I read the first part I immediately still recognized the name and clicked on this - it’s awesome and I really hope you consider making it into a long series. The premise is amazing and you write really well! Keep it up!

Thanks so much for continuing this series, one of my favourite concepts, ever since I came across the first story I’ve bookmarked it hoping for a continuation, it fits my fantasies perfectly. Please don’t stop!

Val thinking she could fix everyone's problems so easily without taking the time to understand why they were so subservient to Michelle is actually super believable and shows she has a hero complex. So it will be so interesting to see Michelle force her to be a mean to her new friends. But most of all I'm interested to see just how powerful Michelle is and what she will do to val herself.

Love this story can't wait for chapter 3

Great story, I'm keen to read more. It's been a month since your comment saying you submitted chapter 3, do you know why it's taking so long to get approved?

Any updates on when Chapter 3 is coming out?

Awesome Story!

My hope for part 3 will never die.

@LemonTek loving the story so far, where is part 3?

lol

1 year ago: "Finally had time to finish Ch. 03 as well, which will be up right away".

CHAPTER 3 PLEASE ITS BEEN A YEAR

Great story

Great story. The author is a very talented storyteller and I hope they continue writing, as I'm dying to know what Michelle has in store for Val next.

I keep checking back for part 3. There's gotta be a sex scene with these characters at some point! There was so much set up!