All Comments on 'Michelle's Revenge'

Well written story. I think a quite a bit more detail at the end (instead of the last couple of paragraphs) would have helped, but I liked the twist at the end.

I thought it was well written. I was curious as to why he did not persue getting information from her as to how they were related before bedding her. It all worked out in the end. Djmcljr

This story had intrigue, a hot and mysterious woman, and an exotic location. This, combined with good language skills and storytelling ability, produced an entertaining 5 star story.

The title almost caused me to not read it since I am not overly enthused about revenge stories (which it turned out not to be). Now I'm glad I read it.

Paul in Oklahoma