All Comments on 'Michelle's Visit'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Why ?

Why did you have to get me so fucking horny ? Did I miss it or did you forget to give her uncle's age

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I've read better...

Yeah, leaving out the uncle's age left me wondering. You said she was 40, so I'm guessing he could have been anywhere from 50-60? Grammar and puncuation could have used more work. Sorry, but this couldn't keep my attention, so I never finished the story. Better luck next time.

Jena121Jena121over 16 years ago
Dear Uncle

Who cares how old the Uncle is - if he is capable - he is worth having a go - keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
nice arouser

i am lucky enough to have had a similar encounter.. i fell in love with my niece and we both got it together at a family reunion.. best sex i ever had...keep writing loved it

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