All Comments on 'Microburst'

Very hot. I’m okay with the improbability but maybe cool it with the thesaurus. Noahian? You’re better than that. Other than those quibbles. Excellent.

No rise-time, step function sex. Gotta love it when scientists write erotica! I had to look up the word adamantine. I don't think I'd use it to describe a woman's nipples, but I wasn't there. Great job!

Author writes as an experienced sailor and scientist himself who has also perhaps experienced storm sex in tornado alley--I'm guessing probably not this good, though. Wow!

If in my school days the teachers had used a story such as this one to teach us science and vocabulary, I suspect I might have paid closer attention and learned more! A 5-star effort! Very erotic and arousing! Well done. Thanks.