All Comments on 'Mid-Life Oasis Ch. 03'

.Good writing developing Jill's sexual desire, so write about Jill's dream job as the beach bar's erotic F*** masseuse at the African nudist obese swingers resort near Cannes..Jill is popular & averages 20 half hour "sessions" per day & she is live on the internet 24/7 .Jill Loves mounting the huge horse-size hung Nigerian basketball players massive cocks ..What fun

Did you read the whole story? Beach bar f*** masseuse? She's an educated woman who lived out a fantasy. I'm interested to see how her submission continues or ends or whatever, but I don't see how she turns into a prostitute or a sex worker. Seems more likely that she dumps the older guy at some point, but the author seems to have them targeted for love.

Anyways, the story is a bit crass here and there, but I guess that's the premise. I'm interested in how it ends after reading the first three. If she ends up as a sex worker, I'll tip my hat to the first commenter, but I doubt that will happen. I liked the way she was on the tip of the boat like one of those old female figureheads on pirate ships. Interesting idea.

I need a mid-life oasis...just like this. My favorite Lit author has once again captured the heart of my secret fantasies without even knowing it. Thank you dear meddlesome for taking me there once again! Now, about Bob Sr. in your other series.... ;)

~your biggest fan

You need to write more stories. Your very good. Mid-Life is great, it needs

more parts to it.

That's nice of you to say. I'm pretty focused on my paid gig right now, but I really do hope to write some more here at some point. I have some new stories, but they need editing and that is very time consuming. Thanks again.

... If we had more of these woman running around. Anyhow, enjoyed the read immensely. Been over a year, definitely time for another, maybe holiday fun, chapter.

Usually I'm not a fan of anal or group sex, but you have sold me this tale superbly. I look forward to more of their adventures and can see that the two of them could become inseparable. Do find time to continue with Jill's submission.

This one is a great serial mind-blower -- PLEASE continue! It's as good as From Sweetie to Slutty, & we'd ALL like to relish a longer tale, & more time in her tail!!!

hope u continue it

Fun, relaxing stories.

That was excellent erotic writing. Pushing so many limits but still very credible and easy to follow. Thanks

Very disappointing that chapter 4 never happened.