All Comments on 'Mid-Workday Delight'

Nicely worked little gem. Thank you.

O my effing gee. I wish I could give twenty stars; I’m seeing stars. Bravo!

.....at myself. Because I can detest the brutality and callousness of the fictional relationship using the same voice with which I can applaud the craftsmanship of the writing. Thanks....I think.

This was great! Bravo. 5.

I came down this site for the sex.

This was great.

Wish I could do that.

Bob

Power games, a little role playing, and some nice cutting dirty talk. My kind of story. And as Vix pointed out, bonus points for writing the whole thing as dialogue. Really nice.

Loved reading this.