All Comments on 'Middle Eastern Minx'

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GforGrahamGforGrahamover 7 years ago
Title?

Nice story, but how is the title relevant?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good story

Very realistic. Many "friends" are reluctant to make first move. Often it happens as in this story, one friend needing a shoulder to cry on. Better to take a chance than regret it.

FormerReaderFormerReaderover 7 years ago
Enjoyed it

I like stories about friends who realize belatedly that they are meant for each other in love as well as friends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Too wordy, they say far too much, sentence after sentence, basically saying the same thing.

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Good story

This is a good story.

Many times, the best friends can be the best lovers.

Now, I go to read the second chapter.

5* for you.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good except for the title

Black curly hair and the name Elizabeth makes her a Middle Eastern Minx? Tell that to my many female UK fruends, my many Italian and Mexican friends and more.

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