All Comments on 'Midnight in Italy'

Loved it. Very good writing and terrific use of the the different perspectives.

First time or humor it's a perfect fit.

Thank you for an enjoyable read.

Just to let you know, there is an immense gap between "he stuck his dick in her"(the most unerotic description possible) and swinging on a chandelier. Erotica is not about athletics or "he did this and then she did that". It is about the senses - taste, touch, sound, smell, and sight - all things that draw a reader in and enable them to put themselves in the characters' places. Those senses should not be overlooked for expediency or because you are bored, or in a hurry, and can't think of any other way to describe sex. I doubt even strokers could be aroused by plunging the dick in.