All Comments on 'Midnight Move Ch. 02'

by UnquietLust

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Anonymousover 2 years ago

Well thought out, organized story. Definitely have added just enough to continue in many different ways. Bravo

sp9983 over 2 years ago

Great, waiting on part 3.

laughdruid over 2 years ago

I love this story and eagerly await the next chapter. Maybe Mike could film the two sisters in his new palace?

Eric_Shift over 2 years ago

Enjoying the story. Well, most of it. The degrading name were off-putting but I guess some people like that. Looking forward to more.

Anonymousover 2 years ago

Excellent story. Can't wait to see where you take it.....I see many possibilities. keep up the good work!

Anonymousover 2 years ago

Great story

Anonymousover 2 years ago

Cant wait for pt 3

mehodge4 over 2 years ago

great second part cant wait for part 3,4 and beyond. you make the story soung so real keep it up

Anonymousover 2 years ago

I have to say. This is one of my top 20 favorite stories on here, lol which I read allot of. So I hope you keep up the good work and that you expand on this story.

cursrah almost 2 years ago

please write more of this story. I really like this storey

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For now I will leave the option for comments on the story, please be kind. Constructive criticism is welcome, but not rude comments. I am not a professional writer, so don't expect that level from me. I write for me and if you like what I submit, please let me know. If not, th...

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