by PoisonPen33
Love the story, eagerly awaiting the next installment. I lust hope it won’t devolve into an orgy. That has ruined so many series I really liked.
You’ve really made me care about the characters. Excellent writing! Please give us another installment!!!
Thanks for the hard work. There was just one bit of dialogue that stuck in my throat a bit at the start:
‘Eleanor shrugged her shoulders. "Probably. The mountains got several inches of fresh snow just this past June. It's why every time some smug prick wags their finger about 'global warming' I want to grab them by the collar and scream 'climate change' while shoving said finger straight up their ass."
"So how did your Physics midterm go?"
"I think it went OK..”’ (etc)
So, the ‘it’s cold so global warming isn’t real’ thing is about the lamest argument that can be made about climate change physics, and they move immediately to a discussion of the physics test and start talking sensibly about it? It feels a bit forced to say the least. But otherwise, thanks for a great escapist read about the college life we all dreamed of.