All Comments on 'Midnight Quickie'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Predictable until it wasn’t.

I knew that it wasn’t the girlfriend since the three were of similar build and this is an April Fools contest. So, ho-hum, I almost quit reading then. Glad I didn’t. Nice twist with the girlfriend being in on it.

What I am surprised about is that the scores aren’t higher. I guess people want more sex but that would have just made him more likely to realize the truth.

gpetagpetaabout 3 years ago

funny but could have more teasing plays

brian_scoobybrian_scoobyalmost 3 years ago

Nice funny story. Very enjoyable read. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thank you for a cute story.

Honesty pays.

Jake told the truth and Becca should love him more for his being forthright.

I am sure that Sunday night was quite pleasant for Becca and Jale, the birthday boy!

Rancher46Rancher46about 2 years ago

Nice twist 5 stars

acupacupover 1 year ago

Not bad, but a bit short on the end without a second chapter or an epilogue.

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