All Comments on 'Midnight Snack'

... I'd have liked the part where the boys fuck her together to be a little more detailed; your story kinda ends where the most interesting part starts.

Maybe you could continue it? After all, this one doesn't have to be the last orgasm the sister gets that night...

no guy is going to act like that if he walked in and found his best friend fucking his sister he would have got pissed and either turned and left the house or beat the crap out of his friend for betraying his trust then thrown him out keep it realistic

It turned me on so I enjoyed it. I would have liked it to be longer and more detailed but it was good none the less. And who cares if the brother's reaction isn't completly realistic. For all we (the readers) know, the brother has been lusting after his sister for years so in that case he would be excited.

But then it was like you had something else to do and had to rush the ending. It started off not too bad, but again, it felt overly rushed.

This is like watching a movie on TV. It feels like it begins and ends between commercials.

I was caught by my brother fucking one of his friends, he was sa mad until i pulled him to me and started sucking his cock, we moved to my bed and had a three way fuck for hours. now my brother and I fuck at every oppertunity we get