All Comments on 'Midnight Snack Ch. 03'

I love role playing and this was so hot to read!

I hope you write more with these characters.

This was great for the most part, but I have one linguistic nitpick: the word "fuck" isn't an acronym. It's a Germanic word that's over 500 years old, and acronyms didn't really come into usage until the early to mid-20th century.