All Comments on 'Midnight Surprise'

Nice to see you back, secretsxywriter.

Quite an original tease of a story; I have read a few tales that include the sleeper cab of a semi-trailer truck, but never one that involved women only. What a nice way to wake up your hard working trucker.

Oh what a tease.... hope there is more.

Stories written in the third person never wotk. You are not talking to your readers.

@Anonymous - Firstly, I think you mean second person. Third person is using He/She/It pronouns. First uses I. Second uses You.

And secondly, while not as widely used, it does work if done right because it's more personal. The reader is the "you" in the situation...the one the narrator is saying and doing things to. So actually, I AM talking to my readers. Directly to them.

Read this short piece when first appeared but did not comment. Just reread and enjoyed again. Very much liked the way you framed this romantically erotic scene — second person as you say makes it so easy to imagine. So pleased to see you sharing your talent and imagination. 5 stars