All Comments on 'Midnight Wood'

No one in the bed but husband and wife. All that's needed.

This was well done, but It seems to be in the wrong category. Loving Wives is supposed to be about "extra-marital fun", rather than simple "marital fun".

I kept waiting for some kind of surprise.

Been there done that, some of best sex ever. Just take her and fuck her hard.

When does she get fucked by the other guy? Isn’t that what this entire category is supposed to be about? ......yep, I just checked. It says “extra marital fun, swinging, sharing and more” so I guess in chapter two he invites his buddies over to take her?

Read the category descriptions before you post. It saves getting flamed for making stupid mistakes. 1*

The last sentence was inadvertently left out ... “Damn, Jose, that was even more mind-blowing than usual, but you’d better leave before Mr, Vanilla comes home!”

Adding ‘bodacious’ boobs for Sweetie and, worse, ‘an enormous dick’ for himself was unnecessary and disruptive to the flow of the action. If the author thinks that Hubby being ‘heavy hung’ is that big of a deal, the author should then presume that Sweetie would campaign for forceful fucking more than was portrayed earlier.

Married couple fuck just isn't a story.

Is that a story? I don't think so