All Comments on 'Midwest Mom'

I loved it. Keep on writing.

I really enjoyed your 1st submission. I hope we see many more from you. Thanks for writing your tale.

Awsome, keep the danger of being caught, everyone loves a secret.

A nicely written story. I think every boy dreams of his mother like this sometime. A nice contrivance to get her to show her body to him. Might have been just a bit rushed, for their first time, but an urgancy was there. Now, let's see how they continue their explorations. So much more to do, sexually.

Great, well paced, realistic story with lots of room to grow. I will certainly be keeping an eye out for more submissions. Thanks.

Has most of the things that make a good story,hope to read more from you

Keep up the good work ... looking forward to seeing more of your stories in the future

experiance to this,it involved a washing machine.My mother scalded her hand I will never ever forget the look in her eyes,we were nearly caught by my father."What the bloody hell has been going on here?" Nothing went on for several days but the smouldering looks from my mother said it all,he never did catch us again,we were far more careful.

The pacing of this story is good in that it takes its time and follows a credible progression. What it lacks is details in the sexual aspects; details about what was done and details about emotions. The addition of more adjectives and adverbs and the addition of more detail will bring your writing alive. Good job for a first story!

it is explicit enough. I'd rather be titillated by suggestions and gentle innuendos than crude, explicit writing. Perhaps we females prefer gentle loving to the "wham, bam, thank-you mam" approach which some people seem to wish for.

Lovely story. What a lucky son.

You got very wet reading this. I have had many wild fantasies about my son. This story made me remember them all.

"Tractor beam of her pussy"? You're not old enough to visit this site.

I was only going to give your story a 4 out of 5 until you used the word "tractor beam". It takes some serious skill (and sci-fi nerdiness) to use that in an erotica story. Hah hah. Well done.

Who the hell is Sam?!

"Sure mom. I'd love a beer," Sam said, noticing that his mother had a glass of wine going.

Very nice, looking forward to reading Pt2. Regards from London

As another has commented, Who the Fuck is "Sam"

" took the burgers out to cook them himself. "

If Mom tripped on the cord of the electric starter, and pulled it onto her back and shoulder, that probably means the entire grill was overturned, with hot coals everywhere EXCEPT in the grill

Those things aside, can't wait to get to the next chapter

Excellent writing all around resulting in a hot and arousing story and series. Can't wait to work all the way thru. Thanx for your stories.

VERY HOT! I want that Mom! I reaalllly want her! Not sure about DAD being in the picture.....but TOTALLY HOT story anyway! I enjoyed it very much!

love how chris and sam tag team their alien mom with a tractor beam.

Wow, that was very good. Thanks

I love stories where the whole family gets involved! Five stars and a favorite point!

Very nice. Such good sex with mom and son.

Going to read part 2 now. Thanks.