by mrplough
... I can honestly tell you that I think you did a great job for a first story and I'm looking forward to much more. Thanks for sharing.
Very erotic story please keep writing!
I enjoy stories that are short, fast, and cleanly written. You won me over.
for your first story this is pretty hot and well written...keep it up and let's see more
just found your story, and loved it...good build up and very sexy...next part needed