All Comments on 'Mike and Me'

I guess this type of story isnt everyones idea of a sex story but me being an old romantic thought it was great!

Looking forward to your next story.

GW

greta job. love it.

I thought the story was well written but not alot of spice was in the story where the wife was writing the story but then she changes her mind and gives into her husband for some sex play keep up the great story writing She Devil Shay.

Pat

I just wanted to say that this was a non fiction story. This happened between me and my husband and I was protraying life as it was realistically... I realize that probably won't appeal to alot of people, but for some.. it will. I hope you enjoy it for what its worth.

It's fine as a vignette or a snapshot of a moment of time in a couple's life but it really isn't a story. A story implies a beginning, middle and an end with a plot detailing a conflict and resolution of same among or between the story's characters. That doesn't take place here. <p> In addition, I think most would contend that it is mis-categorized. It should be in romance. LW implies a third party of some sort beyond the husband and wife. <p> Thanks for writing and please write more. Phil

Here is fine [LW] and your first story was good. Not as good as you will be as you grow.<P>

Try to keep the respect in your story line. More of us can appreciate you that way.

Thanks

However... it belongs under "Romance" or "Erotic Couplings".

"Loving Wives" is for stories about cheating wives or sharing wives. Never-the-less, it's still a good story. :)

However, it is worth reading. I gave it 3*** so keep writing.

and I think a TRUE loving wife story belongs in LW just as much and in fact more so than the cucky bullshit that usually bogs down the artistry of the category. I think it was a beautifully composed vignette, and cool enough for your comment that this was a real story-scene from your marriage. Thanks for sharing and I hope you continued to write more.

Hot little story about husband and loving wife.

How did a decent story make it into LW?

What story?