by thehornyauthor
There are so many things that I would like to say about this story, but I'll keep it simple: 1. It's riddled with stereotypes, 2. Not all black people have ghetto names, 3. Not all black people talk or act the way that you portrayed them in your story...you were quite ignorant. HOWEVER, if this was meant to be a satire of how society views the black community, I can understand because in my mind it was quite over dramatized thus making your point. If not, grow up and expand your mindset because it was very offensive.
Truly I don't know if I've read a story on this web site that was as bad as this and I've read some crap. It was badly written, fairly racist and utterly stupid.
I just hope that this was a satire and a serious piece of literature.
Hmm, i'm usually the last one to leave a bad comment , but this right here, I didn't know if I wanted to tell you about yourself, or just cry.
Don't know what black people you have been around if any but if you have for the love of Mike (no pun intended) don't ever let them read this hot mess of a story I would fear for your safety if you did.
...this crap negative stars. Worst mess I have ever read on Literotica...and I have read some mess! Even for satire, it's horrible!
This was some very ignorant, stereotypical drivel. It read like a Samuel X story and I don't particularly care for that person's writing either. Makes me wonder if these two are one and the same.
Everything I can say has been said. This is just horrible and wrong.
So he wants to be like the normal black guy and deny after fucking everything for months