All Comments on 'Mike Reunites with Family'

Where's the incest? Incest is between two relatives. Nothing was said about h er boyfriend being a relative. Wrong category. big builld up then a big let down.

...& somewhat strange, too. What's he going to do now? That's the big question (as if I didn't know but how will he stage it?)

Great story, I hope it continues soon.

I can't wait to read the upcumming chapters. Great work!

Please continue soon...you kinda left us hanging! Hope you keep it between the brother & sister and build up to something real hot!

1. The character doesn't have to physically have sex with his sister for it to be an incest topic. Clearly, he has sexual thoughts for his sister. That qualifies, despite your narrow definition.

2. It's his freshman attempt at writing erotica and it makes a fine first chapter. He definitely needs polishing and proof-reading. By the the way ... what stories have you written for publication here???

what the fuck an incest story that doesn't include incest should have been in the novels area

it was good until you added the boyfriend then it died that would have killed any feelings he had for her and he would have avoided her until he could move out and since they never touched each other there was no incest so this should have been in the fantacy area since it was all his fantacy learn to put your stories in the proper area

I agree...no need for the boyfriend...and where is the incest?