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by IceVixen07

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

I'd almost forgotten about this story Please bring out the next chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great story

Please keep the chapters coming!

Dont_miss_meDont_miss_meabout 5 years ago
Looking forward

To more of Mike and Jessica...

builder2004builder2004almost 5 years ago
More

Don't leave us waiting too long.

LudvigBlomSELudvigBlomSEalmost 3 years ago

Another story thar one can't grade because it is not finished! Pity, it started nice.

GrandEagle53GrandEagle53over 2 years ago

Slowly / Softly used WAY to many times. VERY distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I couldn’t stop reading! Where’s the next chapter?!

Killer120Killer12010 months ago

It is a good story, but it started falling apart in this part thanks to grammatical errors. You also use the word slowly about nine times in one paragraph, which ended up being very distracting during a critical scene.

Great work overall and I love the way the story is going, I hope you don't stop but just see this as some constructive criticism.

Keep up the great work man!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Good story, but the ending seems incomplete. Is there another chapter???

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