All Comments on 'Mike's Estranged Sister Pt. 02'

Sarah? Emily? Very confusing.

Great work can’t wait to see what happens next

Mike and Sarah are brother and sister. Emily is their daughter from their first time(s) together. Simple.

I think the site/you need to link the two stories together, so when you read to the end of the 1st story, the 2nd one shows up in the 'Read more of this series' section and the 1st story shows up when you read to the end of the 2nd story. That way readers wouldn't be confused about what happened in the story like Anonymous. Given the way the story ended, I'm hoping it will have more chapters and maybe eventually Emily will join in the loving too? Looking forward to reading the continuation.

If you create a profile, you'll get to view stories in the "new" mode that DOES connect story series if you got to a story's last page. As for the story, pretty good so far but I would like more relationship/emotional interaction between the characters. The basic story arc is plausible, adding to its attraction to me as a reader. Do NOT have the daughter joining in, you'll kill the story and there's no reason to go there. Mike is new to the area, so he could easily pass as Sarah's boyfriend (and Emily's father)and go on to be her "husband". 4*, but close to 5*...

Loved the story line, waiting for the next portion.

I can read the writing on the wall. Emily is going to seduce her daddy...damn!

Normally, I'd be very disinterested in Daddy/Daughter sex. But just because of how you set this one up, I might just like it this time. I'll stick around for some more. 5/5

Very good. Now where does their daughter fit in?

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

find_two2@hotmail.com

When I was 17 my 16 yr old sister walk in on me while I was totally naked and what happen I don't know. My sister love me naked and she start masturbating me guess she loves doing it . She end sucking me off

Waiting too long for Emily. I know you know where it was going, just give it to us, please

5*

Tc

Please continue. Saw that you have added a different story. Awaiting part three.

Story needs more chapters!! At least (2) more, please...

You cannot leave this hang like this...

You called Sarah, Emily, when she was on the bed...need to watch mixing up your characters, there...

And, left the door cracked...you know...we know, Emily WATCHED the whole thing!! She had to have had BIG, ROUND EYES from seeing Sarah taking it in her butt...

IF you write more..it will be interesting to see how you integrate Emily...if you do...how the dynamic works for all three of them, into a new family unit!

Another five stars...Yyyaaayyy!!!🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌

Wondering how the rest of the story goes...

Loved it. Want to read more, but sadly, it looks like this storyline is done. I understand though.

Anal creampie for Sarah while she 69s Emily, and Emily cleans it up.

Mmm, don't stop now please. More more. Is he going to make a sibling for Emily or is she going to join in?

Best part of this? Mike's only 6 inches. Slightly above average.

sorry, but the 'fuck any hole you want' stuff just sounded like a gutter slut hooker, not a sister he'd want to fuck. Totally out of character.