All Comments on 'Mike's Estranged Sister Pt. 03'

by DominicVance

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arrow013arrow013about 1 month ago

I hope there is another chapter on the way.

inno0cent_bystanderinno0cent_bystanderabout 1 month ago

You fixed and said Emily instead of Sarah early on there...

Arn284Arn2842 months ago

Klasse ich hoffe es geht weiter

cursrahcursrah5 months ago

more of this story please

Frankie1952Frankie19526 months ago

Oh yes, so hot. wonder how many babies will eventuate. More please.

Carp2021Carp20217 months ago

We need another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

totally off the rails now, like most of your harem stories go... just one trainwreck after another, until the entire railroad runs out of steam.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

like all harem mode stories, goes slowly but surely off the rails to ridiculousness, boredom and repetition. Blech.

GreatwanniGreatwanniabout 1 year ago

Really good addition to the story line! Wouldn’t it be something if Emily just happened to end up pregnant now? Of course, that could be seen as a bit repetitive, but your call. Can’t wait for the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

no tag for mom/parent Hate offspring sex period.

Southpaw1430Southpaw1430about 1 year ago

Good story. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.

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