by DominicVance
More more more PLEASE, even though Mike was a dick back when his sis was pregnant I hope they can make a go of it now that he has grown up a bit. I think em knows much more than she did earlier this day and things could get interesting. Will Sarah give him another child now? Hot n sexy story so please keep going.
I loved this story, hope you are thinking to continue with this story. Small example, say the daughter heard what they said. then the sister gets pregnant again. If you did continue this story, you would be the first.
3 bordering on a 4 . Depends what you do with it , rehash every other version of this story line or find a twist.
Following to see where this goes. Really hope it doesn't turn into another harem story. Totally ruins what makes the taboo category hot to begin with.
Yea, it's taboo - brother & sister, but WTF?? You put out a good story, with some sweetness to it also. Would be nice to have a 2nd part with them being in the same bed, having an unofficial marriage. Depending on how you bring it, maybe making it a family "affair" of sorts with Emily slightly involved.
A solid start. I can see where this is going I canβt wait for more chapters.
My 2 cents
I liked the story and the characters. I liked how you developed the story and not just the sexual part. I look forward to reading more of their adventures. Thanks for your time and your imagination.
Okay, you have my hooked. I'll be sticking around for more as long as you don't get crazy with the ink stuff. That almost dropped the score that I was going to give you. But Sarah speaking up and saying no kept you at 5/5.
Very good story. I love where this is going!! The incest is wonderful. I'm interested to see how Emily fits into the story sexually. Keep writing.
Love, sucks and fucks,
Bob
find_two2@hotmail.com
PS - Is there another child cumming too?
The whole "I did not think it would be so soon" thing from Sarah was TOO FUNNY...and just added to the story line so well.
I also love the whole build-up to the brother-sister lovemaking, with the back story and all; plus, Emily's spying on them, most likely hearing Mike's confession of being her father, not just her uncle...THIS IS GONNA GET EVEN HOTTER...
Daughter/niece seducing Mike, Sarah involved, too...just so much imagination...
Five**5**Stars, you deserve a good rating for this!!
Now...for the NEXT chapter!!ππππ₯π₯π₯π₯π₯