All Comments on 'Mikes First Transgendered'

The story itself was very good, you do need to work on some things to make it easier to read such as grammar, I would reread your sour story in preview before you submit it, read it like you are reading another's story you should pick up the grammar as well as making sure the storyline isn't choppy when read. Other than that the storyline is solid and leaves the reader wondering where you go next. Keep it up, I for one would like to see him fuck her first but what ever way you go should be good.

See what I mean about previewing, missed the word sour (was supposed to be your but came out sour) , when I retyped didn't realize it was still there.

So well written with a good intro, can't wait to keep reading your story. xxx

Fuck that was hot. Loved it!

HOT !!!

"Absolutely true story"! ....... You are one very lucky guy.

Great. How I would like to experience gay sex.

Excellent story!