All Comments on 'Mike's Wish'

Tried to read it, but the first part felt too much like a promotional for his other work.

Totally breaks immersion in the story, especially the part about more chapters on his Patreon felt completely shameless to me...

An interesting story but I’d love to see something like this incorporated into the larger Caleb cannon, if you wanted a darker or less ethical take you could have Caleb ‘linger’ on a memory he took of a Psi rapist or some such, you’d get to write out the scene like this while still contextualizing it

Very clever mix of author wants and Caleb magic!

I like it :) very good start.

A bit Clive Cussler putting yourself in the story but what’s a little self promotion. :)

Definitely want to read more. Maybe Caleb is based off a real person after all and these stories are a way to get norms on a mass scale used to powered people.

Great storyline. Please continue

Ha ha ha!!! Loved the "shameless" self promotion and then referred to yourself as a greedy f'er!

For myself, I love the Caleb story, but this has promise. Hopefully there won't be a clash between Caleb and Mike.

Thank you!

LOL, what a clever idea, a story about a story. Inspired, no doubt, by all the direct feedback you receive. Nice touch with the unapologetic mention of your Patreon. 😀 The progression of this story will be very interesting.

Clever and amusing, now where's my wallet...

"Nowadays I had started reading stories, they tended to do it for me. But even then, there were two problems. If it were a stroke story it was usually too short. I couldn't really get off before the story was over, and if it were a longer story then I often got involved with the plot, and started skimming over the sex, as it just got in the way."

You are reading my mind!

figures.

Been reading Caleb - Less description of sex, more story. Take a lesson from Salman Rushdie, who described a scene between his parents something like "and then they... and then, and then and then!" Not sure which book, I heard the quote on the radio a number of years ago.

I hope you are going to still work on the Caleb story. Will Caleb and the girls ever get with Debs? Jules seems to be curious about Dana interest there?

Great story, very well written.

Good story. Thank you very much. More please.

Plenty very nice

This was a fun read! I will check Caleb next 😊 Thanks for sharing and I will check back for further entries and see if Mike gets really dark or not.

liked it a lot needs more chapters and dont forget Caleb 👍

Super histoire, j'espère une suite bientôt pour suivre ce qu'il vas faire avec la petite caissière.

Great start. Please continue! I am curious where this story will go. I like how you connected this story to the Caleb story. It'd also be interesting to experiment with a female getting powers but on the dark side. What would she do?

Excessively self-promotional. Felt like a vehicle for your advertisement.

Still very nice, but ty for blasting the patreon system.

Foreign readers, with no cc, cannot subscribe. Besides, if there are a dozen writers with splendid stories, like Caleb, it's getting very expensive. Iow... Not nice

Hope you continue this story. I really concept

Enjoyed your story. I hope you continue with Mike's journey