by kidboise
To think I passed on reading this story simply because the title did not catch my attention. I decided to read this because I loved your other series. Your writing is just amazing. It’s so easy to visualize the settings and the way you convey his feelings is just spot on. Gosh, I’m just really invested in these stories now. Please, keep writing!
So intimate, so beautiful. I love the way you express the feelings and emotions of your characters and develop the story so calmly. It’s so enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing with us.
They kissed! I’ve been waiting for this moment and it didn’t disappoint! I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again, I really love this story, I just wish I hadn’t found it yet because I want to binge read the entire story
Never stop.
Me too, Anon. I didn't know what a Chickadee is and so I didn't start reading until 9 or 10 chapters had already been posted! I saw the good ratings so I decided to give the story a chance. I'm so glad I did.
What a romantic, lovely first kiss. You can imagine it like you were there, that’s good writing. Please keep the chapters coming!
You're a master at description! I can see the surroundings, I can picture these two, so gradually falling for each other. That embrace brought tears to my eyes, almost like I was one of them, either one. I'm a glutton for tenderness, and the beauty of love!
Wait until the first time these young men get the nerve to actually 'taste' each others milk! Five stars, of course!