by Amavoyeur
Sexy story. Needs a sequel when we discover the threesome was all daughter Jay's idea. She want sex with her mom and dad.
Yes, you need to keep this 3some going, maybe Jay will join in.
This was really hot, damn I only wish I was in that bed also. Can't wait to see where it goes from there...
My dream is to have something very similar, incest included. Absolutely beautiful story of love.
Looks like I might have to write more bi-curious men involved in taboo situations.
Was a hot idea, but the writing was actually hard to read. Was way too literal and broken, decidedly not 'conversational'. The part I did not like was that the wife wanted Gavin to fuck her without a condom but makes the husband wear one usually and she wanted her son in law's baby. That 100% destroyed the story. Wasn't even remotely hot at that point.
Nice read. Interesting concept that has several different directions you can take this. The best part is that it was written in a non threatening manner, that all parties could enjoy. Please continue.