by LiberalArts
Open ended stories like this are worthless. It went from a three to a one because you couldn't be bothered to finish. No wonder your stories score so poorly.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Reminds me of a date I was on about 13 years ago.
Interesting storyline. Cute twist, with the 'Mommy — Baby' talk. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Next chapter please.
This reminds me of about 15 years ago. I was having sex with a mature woman, she loved when I licking her pussy she would tell me to jerk off at same time. This used to turn her on.
***Interesting opening chapter. Looking forward to future chapters. Thanks for sharing.