All Comments on 'MILF Nurse, or Mother-in-Law?'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Was not a fan.

Found the story lacked detail. It just felt too rushed. I could not really find any source of love, everything just seemed lustful. The plot itself just wasn't interesting either. All characters either introduced or talked about just seem toxic as fuck. The only reason I finished was because it was short and I hate leaving something unfinished. I would give it a 0 if I could, but I guess a 1 will have to do.

Gym52Gym52over 2 years ago

An interesting tale that has raised some specific queries, mainly because of the variations in the use of the English language, Australian, New Zealand, Canadian, American and British are all classed as English, but each one uses variations of words for the same meaning. This harks back to the great statesman Winston Churchill when he remarked that Britain and America were two nations divided by a common language.

CrzySxyFunCrzySxyFunover 2 years ago

“I's” is incorrect. The correct possessive pronoun of the subject “I” is “my”. Please get a better proof reader or get another person to look at your stories.

bluesbobluesboabout 1 year ago

Story wasn't too bad until the end when Mom started confessing her incest with her son and sex with her co-worker.

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19815 months ago

Ok you almost had a decent story until you ruined it by bringing in light a few things such as the mc wasn't a man he was a pussy ass bitch and the mother in law having sex with her son and black coworker and the wife having sex with her boss and black guy as well mixing the 2 kinks wasn't good for the story The 2 kinks being incest and interracial those 2 kinks just don't mesh it can be incest without the other kink if you want to include it in the incest

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19815 months ago

Gym52 that only happened cause we chose to be devided think about it we came from England which is why truthfully England is our mother country even though some say our sister country

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

My wifes father pepe had a stroke and was recovering well in hospital,he'd been there for over a month and the doctors told us that we could take him home,we set up the dining room with a bed and pepe seemed quite happy,he had a little bit of a speech problem and his left side wasn't working due to the stroke but with the right care he would make a full recovery,now what I haven't mentioned is that pepe was as you would say a real ladies man 20 years previous and had countless affairs with different women which lead to Diane my mother in law divorcing him,it was no secret that pepe was supposed to be a fantastic lover and sasha my wife was embarrassed with all the stories she'd heard about him! Anyway pepe needed washing every day as he couldn't do it himself,he'd been with us for 2 days and sasha told him that she needed to change his underwear, he nodded in agreement,sasha took pepe's clothes off him and now only had his underwear to take off! I came into the room at this point and saw her pulling his pants down! His cock nearly hit sasha in the face as it sprung out of his pants! Omg sasha said! It's only natural babe I said,he probably hasn't had a woman being that close to his cock for ages? Isn't that right pepe? Pepe smiled and nodded his head, what do I do with it sasha said to me? Well give it a little wash and put it back in his pants I said, ok then she said and sponged her father's big cock! Sasha giggled as she washed pepe's balls, his cock grew even bigger and looking at it I'd say it was over 9 inches long! Jesus Christ it's bloody huge sasha said putting the bowl of water on the floor! She put pepe's feet into the opening of his pants and pulled them up until she got to his cock! Umm what do I do next? Just grab it and put it in his pants I told her, ok then she said and took hold of her father's cock and tried pulling his underwear over it but his cock was just to big! I can hardly get my hand around it babe she said to me! I suppose you'll have to give him a wank I joked! Pepe let out a funny noise and nodded his head! Do you want sasha to wank you off pepe I asked him? Yes he nodded, I can't he's my father sasha said! What else can we do babe? Omg I can't believe im doing this! Sasha started wanking him off and really got into it! My arm is aching me she said and switched to her other hand! Then she complained about that hand aching her! I suppose I'll have to suck it hey dad? She's messing about I thought to myself? Then couldn't believe my eyes watching her sucking her father's cock! Arhh fuck yeah that's a big cock dad! Sasha wtf I said to her? I don't know what's wrong with me she said slurping on her father's cock,she sucked on it until he came in her mouth

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