All Comments on 'Milfy Battle Ch. 01-02'

by SuperWriter

Sort by:
  • 16 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not bad, but...

...the ending was pretty abrupt. There is a LOT more that you could do with this, and I hope you give it the ol' college try. You'll get a higher rating for the next chapter, if there is one.

derlichderlichover 5 years ago

This is great. Hoping for a threesome at the end.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 5 years ago
Only natural

Attractive people are attracted to each other no matter their bloodlines. Only natural it ends in sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I definitely hope you come back with more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
not so ...

... super, Writer!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loving it

Hope you write much more of this! Great start to the two weeks

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
clever, cute story

very sexy. can't wait for the next few chapters. 5 stars! BUT "SuperWriter"? really? i've always enjoyed modesty!

Crusader235Crusader235over 5 years ago
πŸ‘

One Hot Start! Can't wait for more! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

chytownchytownover 5 years ago
Good Read***

Thanks for sharing.

DunkirkDunkirkover 5 years ago

He needs to breed mom and aunt

TSreaderTSreaderover 5 years ago
A very yummy story!

Very yummy indeed! I hope this continues! Thank you!

NcsujuriNcsujuriover 5 years ago
Cant wait for the next installment!!

Hurry it up, this is an awesome start!

DapperoneDapperoneover 5 years ago
Interesting style

It took a little bit to get used to. Once I got into the story more I started to understand and enjoy it very much.

Looking forward to the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A Good Start

This is a very good start towards what could be a very good story. I’m looking forward to seeing the next chapter, I hope it’s as good as this one was.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Auntie is a freak... I like her!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I liked it. Sexy and cute. However using the word "Stench" to describe his penis smell was a bit crude /a turnoff. Thankfully it was only at the begining.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userSuperWriter@SuperWriter
Please read **** I hope you all enjoy my stories! And while I love writing, it is hard to do it for free. I want to make this a career and write full-time, which obviously means more stories for you guys because I have plenty of great stories waiting to be written. Trust me. ...

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES