All Comments on 'Milk Brings Us Closer'

I did not like how you portrayed the son and quit after the first page.

I swear we have read this before but under a different name and title.

It was a fair story with some bad use of contractions. It would have been better if it was more descriptive.

You really need to work on your descriptions of the sex scenes. There is very little description of affection or emotion in this story. I like the story line but felt like the story needed to filled in a lot more, but especially work on your sex scene descriptions, they were not good to say the least. You could benefits from the advice of an editor. Pretty good first effort though.

I think, Unfortunately there is a lot lost in the translations here. Describing the son's angst at being uprooted after settling and the mother's jealousies could be done better especially. Thanks for sharing. I hoe you will continue to write and improve as you go.

A very hot story.

Liked the story but the sex scenes were a bit short and not much information and there should have been more sex between mother and son 4 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!