by CommanderBelpen
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter! Five stars and a favorite point!
I loved it, such a change from heartless screwing and brutal banging! Don't seesaw they can cope with being an ecstatic mUmmy and Daddy; but I'm absolutely CERT~IN they'll drive one another crazy with happy lust and sharing the best time of their lives!
At the top of the story, Paul was single, then at the end, he had a wife he was separating from. Inconsistencies distract while I am reading.
Thankfully most of us can overlook a mess up or two. Unlike "anonymous" who whines like a preschooler on dang near every story.
You do know you don't have to read things like this, if you have to b!tch about everything, right?
Asking for a friend
Oh my God...my biggest fantasy to have milk flow from my breasts and have someone drink it! I have never had kids but do play with my nipples ALOT and use a nipple corrector to make them stand up better! I fantasize about them responding some day for my lover to drink and suckle till I cum!
Shut up dum cross dresser. This story is on the poor side and criticism is fair.