by Darkromantic1975
Good story, just needs a bit of tuning. Seems a little rushed also, but other than that it was a decent read.
What a fantastic read! The ending below me away! Thanks for writing this!
Thank you for the shout out. Glad I could inspire you with the idea. What you did with it is truly amazing.
My only criticism is that it ended! I need MORE! Yeah I'm being greedy.