All Comments on 'Millie's Kayak Camping Adventure'

Great story! Thanks for sharing it. Cheers, Frankie

The most well written, erotic story I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Thanks so much for your talented work.

Great story, calm reassuring adventure perfect for those who love the outdoors, and a very intimate connection was formed between the three of them. It make me want the read the next chapter!

Great story! Thank-you

Really enjoyable ...

Nice story. Love nude hiking / camping / boating and sex with nature.

Sweet and sexy, and believable. Great dialogue and character development. 5 stars!

Goldenrod said it right - so for my comment re-read his. ;)

Thanks for a lovely story that had me thinking "Awwwwwwww ....."

It seemed to end rather abruptly…

Great story, good character development. The kind of story that leaves all of us outdoor adventurer’s envious of the encounter, we should all be so lucky. Thanks for the read.

Phenomenal! Well worth the time to read it through. You do an admirable job of weaving characters.

What exquisite writing. Just a wonderful story. Congrats.

Perfect. great pace, characters and situation. Not sure it has anywhere else to go but would like to read more on them if you get inspired.

Good story line and character development. I personally like stories of people that are shy and introverted over coming themselves to reach out to others. Thanks for sharing.

Flowed well and had conviction. Delightful story about a slightly introverted woman finding herself.

As with the other comments, a luscious story. 5 stars. Just a niggling bugbear is word tense: Sink, sank, sunk.

What a great story. Really nice characters, personal worries , and then very hot and sensual interaction. Took me awhile to calm my own breathing. Don't suppose there is a chapter 2? Definitely 5 stars.

searched for the movie Wild and Also the Author of the book, also the coastal hiking trails. Thanks to Wikipedia Looks like a Netflix movie night. Good story about self discovery

This story was about as close to perfect as it gets. Hot and sweet as freshly baked cookies, with likeable characters and beautiful descriptions. Love Millie's character arc. 5 stars from a fellow kayaker.

Outstanding! Worth all the buildup. Thank you!

Really enjoyable story, and well balanced.

Page 4 was obviously the best. If it didn't already have a high score I would have stopped before I got to page 4 and given it a 3 instead of a 5.

Really enjoyed this story. Super hot finish!

Hot story, I loved it. Being a kayaker, it spoke to many of my fantasies. I'd love to be Millie (even though I'm a guy.) I've done the naked part of camping by the river and skinny dipping, but without any female companionship.

I truly enjoyed this story. It captures a some wonderful feelings.

Happy to know you enjoyed it, Shanksaw. And thanks for taking the time to leave a comment... everyone else who has commented included. Feedback is so rare on Literotica. It really means a lot, especially for stories like this one where I wasn't sure if it would be well received or not.